old to new

I've been slowly redrawing Krrobar Issue 1 (I have about ten pages so far). Out of all the issues I've written and drawn, I was never fully satisfied with how the first issue came out, I was still learning the pacing and character side of things and my brother and I wrote out a very wordy script that I've been trying to adapt the comic to a more entertaining telling of the story with more of a flow rather than a start-stop approach with the dialog. Hopefully I'll have this finished before too long into the year...

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